Legendary Determination

with so much confusion in his mind,
he wondered when would be the time
the time to finally
become who he wanted to be

so he starts to walk on a brand new road
not sure of just where he may go...
this road with hope is paved:
on this path he was sure to stay.
in his mind there is a plan:
this way comes a determined man.

I watch him as he does his work
and love everything he is worth
He's humble to a fault
and his kind heart is so soft
He presses ever on
though people keep doing him wrong.

His life was full of success
and surely he knew he was blessed
yet behind all the fame
was a lonely heart so full of pain.

God has taken all his hurt away
And now here we must certainly stay
to continue the cause
so the children will never be lost...
to remind them of his work
and with them we must start first.

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