Leaving

Mon, 07/28/2014 - 10:31 -- Zachb27

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I'm moving on, leaving you guys. 

It's for the better, but i'm gonna capsize. 

Fate is cruel, Brutal even.

And because of it, my life is spun. 

I'm dizzy and out of control,

and i need your aid.

Please, is there anyone out there,

I need help or i'm going to fade...

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Zachb27

i need help on how to better my writing.

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