La Vida

Thu, 01/05/2012 - 23:19 -- poet

La vida la vida es un rompe cabesa la vida es de colon negro es tambien castallano como appelledo de Carlos El era mi juego malo y ? Cuando yo mescapaba en la noche para cinca pero la vida no es mas rojo pero es rosado como mi cuadro en Florida

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jwiener

It was beautiful to hear you speak your poem. Poetry, like people, spans across all races and cultures, and you show how language affects how a poem is received.

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