Just Like Rain

I lay here crying, 

letting out my pain.Now my blood is falling,just like rain. My life's a mess,a horror story.Though I must confess,you won't feel sorry. I was the cause,for all this pain.It gave me pause,with nothing to gain. I lost it all,before it even started.I thought I'd grow tall,but now I'm broke-hearted. 

I lay here crying, 

letting out my pain.Now my blood is falling,just like rain.

 

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