"Judgement" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 23/9/2016

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United Kingdom

Like Most People I Try To Show GOOD Judgement... !!!
But It's Easier Said Than Done For Sure... !!!

Like Patience... ESCAPING...........................
POOR Judgement Is Stationed Right Next To IMPATIENCE...
And NOT Being WISE When It Comes To The Vibes You CHOOSE To Live By...
POOR Judgements Breed FIGHTS And SNIFFING THOSE Lines...
That BLOW UP Weak Minds Whose Judgement's UNWISE... !!!
These Days I Now Find That Judgements Can BLIND...
Your Mind From ... The TRUTH ... !!!
Most Now Use Their Eyes As If They're SHUT TIGHT... !?!
So Are Therefore INCLINED To Mentally BIND...
Themselves Into Lives Where NONSENSE and LIES...
Are What They LIVE BY... The Question Is... " WHY "... ?
It Seems Cos' Most Judgements Are Now Fuelled By PRIDE... !!!!!!
And Modern Day Platters Like Whose Lives Should MATTER... !?!
...... Black Peoples' or Whites ...... ???
As If There Aren't Colours of DIFFERENT Types In Our HUMAN Kind... ?!?
Which PROVES That Some Smother THEMSELVES From Their Brothers...
Yeah HUMANS That's Right... !!!!!!
A Lot of BLOODSUCKERS Now ROAM Human Kind...
WITHOUT Facing JUDGEMENT Because of Their CRIMES... !?!
From Police To Our Leaders To... SICK Paedophiles... !!!!!!!!!!!
Who KEEP Running A RIOT With Young Peoples' Lives... !!!
Who SOMEHOW When JUDGED For ABUSES and CRIMES...
Are NOT Made To SUFFER By JUDGES And OTHERS...
Whose Voices DON'T Rumble Like Boxings' Mike Buffer... !!?!!
They QUICKLY GO Silent When People Face VIOLENCE... !!!
Because of THOSE SIRENS That Now Harbour TYRANTS... !!!!!!
Who Wear UNIFORMS And KICK UP A STORM...
Whenever Their Judgements Are Brought To THE FORE... !!!!!
The Judgements They're Bringing May Breed... " Civil War "... ?!?
That Has NO Web Slinging Or... HEROES Who SOAR... !!!!!!!!!!!
But VILLAINS Whose Law Is Making Blood POUR... !!!
So Here Is The SCORE...
MY Judgement Is THIS What Are They GOOD For... !?!
If You DON'T KNOW The Song I Think Something's WRONG... !!!
Wars Are POOR Judgments...
ENFORCED Over NONSENSE As I Said... BEFORE... !!!!!

PRIDE Is The Key That LOCKS Peoples' Chi... !!!
From Those NOW Gum RUNNING...
Role Models Like Upton... Who CLEARLY Are JUDGING... !!!
When She Should Say NOTHING Cos' When Police FUNCTION...
I'm Pretty DAMN SURE That She DON'T Feel TRUNCHEON...
When She's There At Luncheons Where Anthems Be RUNNING... !!!
That PLAY For DUMB Whores Whose Actions AREN'T PURE...
When They Reach... FOREIGN Shores... !!!!!
And HISTORY SHOWS How Their Anthems Then STOLE MORE Than Pots of Gold... !!!!!
They STOLE Rights From People Who CLEARLY Were Feeble...
So Made Some POOR CHOICES INSTEAD of USE Voices To WARD OFF Their EVIL... !!!!!!!!

Which They ..... SHOULD of Done ..... !!!
Instead of BECOME A People Who Kneeled...
When WHIPS Were The SHIELD That THESE Anthems Stemmed From... !!!
So LISTEN Ms. Upton... Just STICK To Your Function...
To... PUT ON Your Thong And SHOW OFF Your Bod'...
If Kneeling's A PROBLEM Then You Should STAND UP... !!!
Cos' Judgment Will Come For You And Your GODS... !!!
SOLDIERS And COPS Whose Songs Play At GRAVES of People They've SLAYED... !!!
While IGNORANCE Claims SUPREMACY Chains That YOUR Forefathers Made... !!!

................... Aren't THEY A DISGRACE ................ ?!?

I Guess NOT To THEM...
When They Chose VIOLENCE To FUEL Their Anthems... !!!!!!
So That's Where I'll END...
NOBODY's Above Facing... Being JUDGED... !!!
But DON'T Let Your PRIDE DEFINE What is Right...
Or Be What Supplies Your... INNER MIND's Eye... !!!
Because You May Find That... WAY Down The Line................................

That You're LACKING Substance That Leads To... POOR...

.......................... " Judgement " ..................

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