its a shame

Poverty, the new H&M and look ON SALE, nigger colored hoodies keeping u suspicious for the low cost of ur life. looking into the eyes of reality never seemed so grim. who would have thought making it to 20 was so hard to doro poem here]

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RebeccaYSPerez

12 years ago

I love the beginning i can feel it going somewhere amazing i would love to see it finished and fixed

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