Is it Healthy?

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84095
United States
40° 32' 59.6364" N, 111° 59' 16.872" W

The people I see,
They touch, but I don't feel.
In dreams
I see their faces,
Full of quiet docility.
Our lives pass by
With superficial contact.
I don't know me,
How could you?
Can you see what you don't look for?
Am I the details between the lines?
Or do I fill the static in your background?
You won't remember me
Not on the surface.

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