It doesn't add up

Wed, 10/29/2014 - 17:00 -- Myther

ME

inadequacy, inadequacy

try try try try

inadequacy, inadequacy

try try try try

inadequacy, inadequacy

try try try try

inadequacy, inadequacy

try

inadequacy, inadequacy

try try try try

inadequacy, inadequacy

cry cry cry

inadequacy, inadequecy

try try try try

THEY

inadequacy, competency

try try succeed

praise praise

competency

praise praise

rewards

try success

praise praise praise

smile

Comments

Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression! 

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