Mon, 01/27/2014 - 12:00 -- jkdayao

The sun, up high

warm breeze.


take me away.


snap. flew out,

new place


foggy nights.


looked back,

people anew.

no one knew.

i cried too.


forward, looking

not east, nor west.

past is past,

work hard for them.


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