Invisible

Location

21044
United States
39° 12' 23.9688" N, 76° 53' 1.0536" W

There is a lullaby
as gentle as a storm.
In it there goes a hush of abeyance.

They pace in marches    
with pristine apathy
and in each footprint
their walk evanesces into something…
not even a shadow could follow.                

Memories displaced,
now rings the ballad of their story.

Their bodies eclipsed with bellicose machinery,
and where’s the world?    

Are they practicing stoics?

Perhaps if we look hard enough
we will see the vestige of smiles
and their accomplices of tempered laughter.

But what we find are little warriors
marked as young veterans           

Their once instilled innocence
whispers in a hoarse voice,
“Why would humanity be such a
neglectful mother
and let her children play with guns
and act as soldiers?”

Comments

Destinedforgreatness1

This is good ! The hypothetical questions really grab a hold of the brain and force it to ponder. Good topic as well don't see many about this one.

Eunoia

There's a voice, there's emotion, there's power words, oh yeah!
I am not very clear on what you are talking about though? can you tell me? (not in the poem but in the reply space)

I like how you give us questions and you give us a mystery it reminds me of the older generation of poetry? How do you write like that? It's isn't like modern day spoken word, but I appreciate both types a lot. They touch me in different ways. You going far, young poet, I can tell. best of luck!

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