Invisible.

If I feel like I'm the outcast, does that mean it's true?
With all these weird stares, it must be true.
But when I see you, you take me away,into the night and day.
When I look at the stars, my heart fades to dark.
When I see light, my heart turns to bright.
But you're too far away, why can't you be here today?
I feel so invisible, and not seeing you makes me miserable.
Without having you is having no air.
Is that why people stare?
Am i that invisible without you there?

Comments

lacriosa

I really enjoyed reading the poem. Those last three lines were really powerful. I can't think of any other way to have ended this poem.

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