Intoxicated

she said

my touch intoxicated her

like one too many rums

i just hope she stays drunk on me

absolutely filthy drunk

for the rest of our lives

 

Kira

 

Instagram: @kirapoems

Comments

ivone

"sweet" but so simple 

xKira111x

Thank you! i have a lot more

on my Instagram @kirapoems

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