Innocence

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Innocence stolen without one's permission
Innocence gone without one's submission

Innocence lost through one's own plan
Innocence lost by not defining what is a man

Innocence turned to hatred and fear
Innocence gone, no man can come near

Innocence taken from a little girls heart
Innocence replaced by mistrust, you thought you were smart

Innocence dissapears like a man on the run
Innocence faded before it's begun

Innocence obscured like a cloud over the moon
Innocence ripped away too soon 

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Bianca_Bbycakes

I really liked this poem and it held a lot of meaning for me and it was written nicely.

I also love writing poetry and I would love it if you could check out and mine and give some feedback. It'd be nice to hear some advanced writer's feedback on a new comer. (:

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

thank you for the comment

i write to touch and impact lives

its about connection to people from all over the world

i'll check out your poems

 

also-check out my other poems i've written

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