An Immortal Soul

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20019
United States
38° 53' 27.9348" N, 76° 56' 49.2792" W

Love: we met on a winter night so cold
It was a very hard day for us all
The trees were sad without their leaves to hold
The sun hiding was waiting for springs call

Love stayed by my side and gave me some heat
When love is around my life is just fine
My lungs plays a song my heart thumps a beat
Love is real, Love is here, Love is all mine.

When love is gone my lungs will sing off key
The thump of my heart is way out of place
When love is by my side I can be me
Love’s the reason theirs a smile on my face

Love: An immortal soul, never dying
Love: a strong feeling so mesmerizing

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