I'm looking into your face.

Tue, 11/13/2012 - 21:36 -- korenmw

I'm looking into your face. We stare at each other for a while. its as if I am invisible. You talk about me behind my back. everywhere I look, people see nothing inside me. they don't even care about me. I am looking into the crowd to find someone like you. Its not till I leave the bad past when I find you. I came to you with nothing. just looking to talk to you. I found you, you are my everything.

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

interesting perspective

see people who they really are

and don't be in a position where you get hurt

observe your surroundings

great job

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