i write facing forwardthe struggling

i write facing forward

the struggling view

but i want to see deeper

the delving truth

i know where the thoughts are

i see but cant read

you dive in,

swim up,

shuffle to the left,

and there are the thoughts,

i treasure in my head.

 

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