I try I try

Mon, 01/05/2015 - 00:16 -- Mustafa

Imperfect yet I get up to brush my teeth

which I believe is the best feature of me

flawless

The stars are bright and my future is death

but I look in the mirror and see vibrant life

but with this I do not see delight

The best of me is what can not be seen but is said to be my personality

flawless

I listened to storys

they came to be oh so Goriy because the story teller was only a little girl

now to be a young teen

yet scared in life

safe in death and

I made her a promise saying I will always be here when she needs me

flawless

or so she said but I seem to dissagree

only my motives were pure and my heart heavy

to make her feel selfless but I do not feel accomplished

I feel as if I lied to put a smile on her face

flawless

only to be come a disgrace

but at the end of the day I can look in to the mirror

to see a beautiful smile saying

flawless

you tried your hardest to make her feel oh so

Flawless

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