I Remember Watching the Rain

Fri, 10/04/2013 - 22:26 -- JPB

I remember watching the rain one summer day,
Soothing, calming, pattering on my window.
The rain has always been a fascination of mine.
So brilliant, so magnificent, so life giving.
Lo and behold the glory that is the rain.

The rain always made me feel good.
The cool water running down my face and arms
Soothing, like your voice and heart beat.
So much i did feel your warming love that rain would remind of you.
Though it was cold, the rain, i felt warm.
The thought of you with your arms around me as i saw myself standing in the rain,
Watching,
Watching myself consumed by your love and care.
I felt warm.
I let you know today i did watch the rain,
But the rain alone is not what i saw.

I remember watching the rain that one summer day,
With thoughts of you as i did gaze out my window

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