I long to be.....

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74743
United States
34° 4' 39.8496" N, 95° 26' 9.0708" W

I long to be a mother, to keep my child warm, and know that his or her dad will keep them safe from harm.
I long to be a mother to raise my kids up right, and tell them that I love them each and every night.
I long to be a mother to raise my kids with pride, and let them know that I will always be by their side.
I long to be a mother to watch my children grow, but this feeling of happiness I will never know.

Comments

jwiener

The imagery in this poem is very strong. Also, the repetition is a great strategy to use to get your point across to the reader.

uthinkitinkit91

I guess I'm glad I got my point across....

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