As I Lay

Thu, 05/16/2013 - 13:27 -- tmgl14

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33712
United States
27° 44' 52.8324" N, 82° 39' 52.3692" W

Burning chest of sorrow
On the bed I lay to stare
To look at the walls and be so hollow
It took two breaths of my air

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