I Have A Dream...

Mon, 05/05/2014 - 22:17 -- Jaszyyy
I dream of a bond from birth growing stronger everyday.
Not everyone understands the roles being played. 
Although I didn't come from your womb I am your daughter. 
A child full of heartache growing up without a father. 
As laughter and joy enter my heart
The feeling of sorrow begins to depart. 
A sense of completion is what is felt
When my wounds are healed with your help. 
Going through tough times and yet I smile
Because in the end it'll all be worthwhile. 
The bond we have grows with our love
For I was placed under you care thanks to the man above. 
Never will my mom know the pain she caused.
Deep down I'll always have these ugly scars. 
I know that you'll always be there
And continue to expand the bond we share. 



I see the sonnet form, but lines 15 and 16 don't actually make a near rhyme from what I see. You also seem to lose your theme midway through. Still, I can feel the emotion in your diction and form, so I really like it. Keep up the good work!

Need to talk?

If you ever need help or support, we trust CrisisTextline.org for people dealing with depression. Text HOME to 741741