I Dreamed

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I dreamed of

Darkness

Came to me

In the night

While all was sleeping

I dreamed of

Poison

Killing me

In the night

While all were dreaming

Villains

Came to me

In the night

I dreamed of

 

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I dreamed of darkness

Came to me

In the night

While all was sleeping

I dreamed of poison

Killing me

In the night

While all were dreaming villains

Came to me

In the night

I dreamed of

 

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I dreamed of

Darkness came to me

In the night

While all was sleeping

I dreamed of

Poison killing me

In the night

While all were dreaming

Villains came to me

In the night I dreamed of

 

 

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