how much he loved her

her screams turned to silence

as he pulled her hair back

and covered her mouth

 

she kept saying no

pleading him to stop

 

as he continued to tell her

how beautiful she was

and how much he loved her

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

11 years ago

intersting beginning

what was the aftermath of this particular poem

add a stanza to captivate the viewers

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