Hopeless Love

You're a story I summarize

all of these feelings that run through my mindBad connections on the line with the one I felt was minebut who could you be ? it's a mystery to identifyall ik is that I want youwhy you? I can't describe.but there is something I should suggestI just may put it to the testYou can tell the tone of my voicethat i've been hurt, played, and distressedand so you see my point of viewMy point is that I want youand that's some mess I can't retellnot even a metaphor or a simile can comprehend this taleI just knew that I would failhopeless love is like a jailI'm trying to determine whether or not you are my bail.

This poem is about: 
Me

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