Hope is elusive


We made a promise years ago, to love and honor even though, at times it would get hard to see, the path God laid for you and me, the storms of life come fast and hard, they mark our hopes and dreams with scars, they're meant to drive us to our knees, to look to Him for sweet release, but without you I cannot see, the path that lay in front of me, the way is blocked, my eyes are blurred, I don't have strength to trust His word, my life is gone, hope turned to dread, my wife moved on, my faith is dead

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