her version of perfect

vanilla and chocolate swirl

the aroma to my air boy

makes me feel sweet like candy boy

drinks until he slurs

but can still make the words

‘i love you’ boy

assertive and telegraphic

predictable until he isn’t boy

ends up leaving like the sun

but always coming back like the moon

boy

how does everything feel so good right

so perfect

until the definition of perfection

is everything about him

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