Hatred

It's unbearable The pain I felt I lost half of myselfDesireHatred Left alone in the cold Emptiness Loneliness No one could relate BrokenI was broken There's was no fix No restoration  MyselfI lost sight of.When the water runs cold The ice touches your skin  Each hair prickles upMisery washes over She's alone You're aloneI'm alone.We're alone Can we be alone together. 

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