Hard-working

Thu, 11/13/2014 - 12:55 -- dmanw09

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Inexorable

unstoppable,  immovable

a true ironclad through every obstacle

doing everything possible

to achieve my every dream

im going to be phenomenal

like the underdog, people will see

it's optical

See hard work plus dedication leaves

nothing impossible

My every particle is driven,

this will be my chronicle

Some think i’m too illogical

Nah just paradoxical

No i will never be God

but close to philosophical as humanly possible

I used to be that ossicle

That small guy,

Everything will fall in place

like a domino

This drive will only be methodical

But this is me, its all just me

Deontological

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