Half a Soul

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95765
United States
38° 48' 41.0112" N, 121° 16' 26.6916" W

(poems go here) I find my gaze is drawn to her beauty

Her eyes glisten in the evening’s twilight

She haunts my every thought unsteadily

She keeps the serenity through the night

When I brave the night she’s always with me

When she visits her doctor I’m at her side

She makes me smile by smiling brightly

At midnight we stand at each other’s side

I drown in her pain and she does mine

Her hearts leaps and pulls mine along with it

In her eyes she’s ok but in mine she shines

In this life she completes my spirit

Without my soul, life is not worth living

To live with half my soul is even more depressing

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