Had no

He had no mom

He had no dad

He knew where he was from

He knew what he had.

 

He had no hate

He had no love

He could not wait 

To be above.

 

He had no wife

He had no son

He went through life

Knowing what he had done.

 

He had no smile

He had no strength 

He had a while

Before reaching that length.

 

He had no feel

He had no one

He could not deal

So he took a gun..

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