Grandpa

WHY....

WHY..

did you leave 

was it me

self harm hit me like ice 

when you felt 

i was lost 

daily life cuttting myself 

i was broken 

tears in my eyes everyday 

day by day depression 

suicidial thoughts going through my head 

"im not strong enough"

but its ok

i know you are okay

your in heaven 

now...

your not suffering anymore

your not sick 

your in in pain

god had to take you for a reason

to free you from sickness

im glad your okay 

but......

i still misss you

 

 

 

Comments

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

your grandfather will be proud if hwe heard this poem

very compelling in terms of its description

its all about healing and moving forward-always keep him in your spirits

you have a purpsoe to be in this world

keep writing

Yumiemile

thank you 

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