goodbye to the guy in the mirror

goodbye is all i can say, together wev'e been through good and bad days, gota say goodbye cuz the advice you have given has always led me astray, a great and lonely path is one that i choose to walk now, choosing to keep my head in the clouds feet planted into the ground, ya its not right to always blame you, but we're one in the same and when worse came to worse it's your side i decided to choose, the devil over my shoulder i finally get the meaning, all you do is whisper and laugh  while i am the one living with regret because ofthe stupid things i am speaking, been on the brink of suicide how many times, oh right you wont say because you only make an appearence on bad times, those times when i need good advice, sorry to na i am not but i am done, this relationship we had for years is now crumbs, who are you to tell me to give up, you'd rather bring me down than tell me to keep my chin up, look at yourself aj cuz im talking to you, instead of turning the negative into something positive you let it destroy you, youre not a kid no more get over it,  tommorows a new day its not over yet, chest out head up chase the dream not the dollar or cent, god gave us all one gift "choice" dont forget.

 

                                                                 by a young man who see's what he need to change and is willing to learn from his mistakes. to all those who read this it might not be the best poem but its how i feel life brings you down but a strong person is willing to lift that weight back up and not let is scare them.  i say goodbye to the old me today because the way i have lived life before has not lead me anywhere but into sorrow. if youre young understand that no matter what life throws at you its not over yet, we all have a choice on how we respong to things, the stronger man sees the hard times and uses what ever emotion that comes from it make them stronger. bless all respect all.

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