good night

Location

10458
United States
40° 51' 43.8444" N, 73° 53' 9.636" W

another day that was given away
missing one's voice, one's smile
and all the things that was said
but she will not mourn nor cry
instead
will embark a new life to celebrate
as one stands over the other, one release one's burden
questions that are finally answered
unfortunately, it was never answered in words
now
standing face to face, one still converses with oneself
one hoped the other enjoyed the last day they met
how bad can it really be
this is an opportunity
when one uses one's strength
in showering that mounts up to hatred
giving the heart the ability to shed blood
for that reason
one can get to sleep in peace
good night

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