Golden Letters Short ...
Is the Oracle wise
the Buddha fat
or the Great
Niagara wet
Description wanes
where titan’s reign
as words are left
to falter
And blow upwind
against the grain
in messages
— sublime
(The New Room: December, 2024)
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cecilymock
Your concise, philosophical poem brings to mind the sharp wit and paradoxical wisdom of Emily Dickinson, particularly in how you challenge conventional descriptors and assumptions. The way you stack questions about iconic symbols of wisdom and power, then pivot to show language's limitations, is reminiscent of Wallace Stevens' abstract contemplations in poems like "Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Blackbird." Your masterful use of internal rhyme ("reign/wane" and "grain/sublime") creates a musical quality that carries the reader through the philosophical journey. The image of words blowing "upwind against the grain" is especially powerful - keep cultivating this ability to pack deep meaning into spare, elegant verses.