God's Command

Why don't people understand
That under God's command
We should love not hate
Those who draw out anger with a stake
That we should not talk about
Those whose face's may be of a trout

Why don't poeple understand
That under God's command
We should not lie
That there is no cake or pie
That we should be pure
Not follow the world's "cure"

Why don't people understand
That under God's command
The Bible
Is not a paddle
That we are to love
Not shove

Why can't people see
How we should be
Under God's command
Why don't they understand?

Comments

Fahiru

It takes a brave person to really write about what they believe in. You'll see "artists" everywhere, proclaiming tolerance(even though they'll shoot you down as soon as you say something they don't like) , saying that they're not afraid to be different, even though they all do the same things. It makes me sad. Forgive them, for they know not what they do. But I'm glad that you decided to tell the truth. Thank you.

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