A Girl's Heart

Sat, 10/10/2020 - 01:39 -- azco

She saw him from the corner

of the street,

Kissing a girl around her

neck, pulling her in,

Kissing her lips

& left with tears in her eyes.

As she was running with tears in her eyes,

People stared at her with dirty looks in their eyes,

& I remembered

"They witnessed her destruction,

Then were left to wonder,

why she saw nothing but darkness?

Though her eyes were shining like the stars,

But maybe they had forgotten,

That a star shines the brightest,

when it's starting to collapse."  
   ~yamuka  

 

Comments

GRRohn

that got sad real fast, and it hit hard. Also, I LOVED IT! 

azco

thanks n i'm glad you like it

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