The Girl who Shined

Location

32765
United States
28° 40' 39.8784" N, 81° 11' 48.4656" W

What a beautiful girl, with so much she embraced She had dreams & goals beyond both time & space Beautiful girl, she begins her foggy view Self-hatred & sadness is something new Her life is now filled with fear & despair She begins her track, as her body starts to tear "Sad girl you are fat & far from free, You are uncapable from distinguishing yourself from me" The amazing girl attempts to realize her worth She begins to fight & put all her strength forth Wonderful girl finds herself & is free She learns she is special, she has discovered the key

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Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression! 

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