A Girl Condemned

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Your words,

they tear me apart

taking my innocence.

'Just this once'

and a million more.

A promise broken

where's the truth?

On my knees

I beg and plead.

It's not enough

I'm still unseen.

In the dark

I wait for you.

The engine roars

and backs away.

'Oh God please'

I always pray.

Not again, 

not today.

On my knees

my body shakes.

Once you leave

I scrub away

all the things

I dare not say.

To this day

I'm not the same.

I am broken

and afraid.

His words,

they never leave.

Deep inside

I feel their pain.

'Once more'

he'd always need.

On my knees

I'd beg and plead.

The tears,

they would stream.

Pulled away

just to spit

oh, the anger 

I would face.

The things he did

they make me sick.

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RebeccaYSPerez

The pattern and the haunting melody of this poem is certainly something that will leave a reader unsure of what to think afterwards because it simply leaves you in a state of awe. This poem resonates and echoes in my head even after I've read it. Thank you so much for sending this in. I really like how you've set it up because it gave the poem a different pattern, a different way to read it than it would have if you had not done so.

Rebecca

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