A Giant Star

Location

46947
United States
40° 46' 50.664" N, 86° 22' 41.592" W

A bright shining star
in the center of the Milky Way
lighting the world
the earth revolving around it
the ball of fire burns continuously
outshining the moon
it was created for man’s sake
without it the world can’t support life
growing in earth’s soil
although it may blind our eyes
the sun is our only light
banishing the darkness
to see what is beyond
we need the sun
to guide our way

Comments

vilchizr

out of all the poems i have written this one is my favorite because i feel that i wrote this one with passion.

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