Garden's Ray

Sun, 10/09/2016 - 01:35 -- Marky19

A ray in the Garden's light shines here

Dark and bright under Raymond lights. 

Without Hawaiian bread they fear, 

Or I fear, as I have to break up fights. 

 

Ali's son laughs, he hates his school:

They're mad all day long. 

And as he left, combat ceased. 

Was he in the wrong?

 

Snow White thanks me twice,

The Raymond lights see none.  

His mother's job has its price,

A lot of love and less fun. 

 

Like back then, there isn't time

For me to play soccer with you. 

And to this day I don't know why

No one likes to have fun. 

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