Forth Dimension Dreams

Walk slow swinging shadow

Look on silent friend

I'll banish you to the darkest corner of my mind

Then force you out again

 

The company of your sihloette 

The gangly movements I shant forget

Copy my insecure movement

You make them look effortless

 

Could you just take me with you once?

I want to the chance to haunt

I could tame corrupt men with the truth

In the shadows  I move

 

 

Comments

j.monsibaiz1596

really intresting i liked it :)

Blood_Rainicorn

I appreciate all the good comments I get! :) I try to make it a point to say thank you to everyone! Sorry it's late though, my email started putting my comments in my junk folder!

j.monsibaiz1596

very inspiring and i love the imagery!:)

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