The Forgotten Planet

bright

too bright some might say

i still orbit around her

even though im the farthest from her

i still rotate around her

but the others are faster than i 

they move quicker and give her more

i’m trying

i try to move faster

i hope she sees me

i know im slow 

i know im small 

she cant even see me

but she still shines on me

as far as i am 

she still puts light on me

nobody else even bats an eye

but she never forgets me

she never did 

its hard out here

deep in space 

forgotten…

This poem is about: 
Me

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