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Thu, 12/19/2013 - 20:55 -- selizad

you beautiful rock of all the elements

that looks like nothing but a small blue dot from space

so small, so big; it's perplexing.

and you, the atomos, composing all the elements,

simply by trading and sharing your smallest subunit

so small, so essential; existence is perplexing.

the most perplexing of all, still,

is the complete lack of reverence

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mmoresi0.410

Beautifully concise! I love it!

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