Flawless Poem

Punctuation does not decipher meaning.

Variation maybe,

But when its from my heart's beginning,

commas become enslaving.

Can i write inside my mind,

without a change,

that do deprive?

Cause in my eye,

perfection unveils strangely.

 
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