First

Am I wrong if I tell you I want to make love to your mind first ?

Before giving giving you back shots that sweat out your hair in make your spine hurt.

I want to make you mine first.

I want to put in the time first.

Can we have a glass of wine first? Act like kids and bump and grind first ?

Don't spoil the pleasure of anticipation leave the lights on.

I want to see you shine first.

I'm already impressed with your body; I want you to show me how your mind works.

What makes you focused , How your grind works, before I make your inner thighs hurt.

Comments

kayj.miller

I reallly dig this. Just a suggestion to check the spelling of some things and you have the word giving repeated twice. 

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