Finding Interest

You see and then connect
From rebound to rebound, it’s all in your head
these broken souls, and misfortunate events
are completely suppressed, once you take them to bed
trapped in a body of sinful debt
the beast accepts weak minds, cash and credit
The walk of shame has evolved into respect
Pictures of every person that has touched your lips
crowds your newsfeed
just like your esteem
Because a connection now is nothing more than
false affection, redirection, and copious rejection

This poem is about: 
Me
My family
My community
My country

Comments

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

Find that love in God
Knows that He will never leave nor forsaken you

Very expressive poem
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Carrillo.Erica96

You're right! God's love is universal, and he holds the patience of the world. Thank you so much for the comment. How can i promote?

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

there's a section call groups

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join my group and then promote your work

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

God's  love is so real and genuine

He is so merciful

 

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