A Fantasy Dream
He touches her hand, I watch as they get close;
I wish it was us, for now I sit alone.
He wraps around her, holding her tight;
The slightest breeze, gives me the coldest chill
I look to the sky wondering
if you look upon the stars as I do.
Or perhaps you’re dreaming of
you, a heroic knight, rescuing your fair maiden.
As the shiver escapes me, reality awakens me
returning me to the romantic cuddly couple’s scene .
But, I beckon to the night, to become hidden in its covers,
to allow my eyes to fall onto my own fantasy dream.
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While the subject matter is pretty universal, there are some great-quality lines in here. May favorite: "But, I beckon to the night, to become hidden in its covers." There's sort of a classical/antiquated feel to the word "become," which lends it a nostalgic air, and comparing the night to a bed strongly underscores the romantic feel of the poem.