Falling Dreams

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30904
United States
33° 28' 39.3024" N, 82° 0' 48.474" W

She has so much to lose with only a little to gain.
Her tears fall quickly because she cries with the rain.
She never thought of losing and having so many falling dreams.
She never saw it coming but life isn't what it seems.
She's a little girl alone and in a world so cold.
She tries to imagine a pretend place but pretending is getting old.
She's so deep, her love's so strong, and she has a big heart to match,
And she deeply believes one of those dreams that's falling she'll one day catch.
So she goes to school and begins to learn.
And all of the pain she slowly let's burn.
The lessons are taught...
The battles are fought...
And one of the dreams that's falling is quickly caught.
If she can do it then you can too.
Don't ever doubt yourself and say what you can't do!
Because falling dreams can be caught.
And the only battle lost is the one not fought.

Comments

Emylee's Nightdreams

This is beautiful... exactly how I feel sometimes

lovextyy

Thank You So Much (:
P.S. Remember It All Gets Better In Time <3

October Jade

Really inspirational. I like it a lot. Good job!

RebeccaYSPerez

This poem was gorgeous and definitely brought a tear to my eye. There are many times I feel that way and as I can see, as we are always told, we are never the only one. I'm sure this poem has brought so much hope to everyone who has rrrrread it! Thank you so much for sharing! 

If you wouldn't mind I would love to pass this on to our Social Media Admin to share on our social media. Would that be okay with you? Of course we will always be sure to site you as the author.

Becca.

lovextyy

You can post it(:

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