Fall Night

I took a walk up to the hill

It sure is a good night for this

My arms feel the air and its chill

The quiet sounds so much like bliss

My feet crunch through leaves that fell down

It is the only sound I hear

All of the leaves right now are brown

And the noise sounds like a glad cheer

On top of the hill I see far

My pants are short my thighs are cold

But now I look at a bright star

Cause it shines big and it shines bold

Right here it is not at all hot

But I like this fall night a lot


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