Eyes That See All

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Scowling eyes filled with growing tears,

which bleed and shed their seething fears.

A land once ruled by natural laws,

soon crumbled under political claws.

These eyes, they see what is now disowned,

a beautiful place no longer known.

Comments

AOSchmidt

I really enjoy the word choice, and the slight sense of ambiguity.

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